CK Lynn

You definately captured the frustrations of all the big tests heaped on during one week. I would like to see the verses made longer, as well as the ryhme (is ...

I think that if the mother can't take care of a child, then abortion is okay. What kind of life would the child have anyway? But if the mom just ...

I liked this! Though maybe space it out? So everyday it's all the same The morning set in a background of Grey Nighttime just an illusion to shield our thoughts ...

Um, was there something posted here?

I don't really like cut spelling, or chatspeak, or whatever its called. It's caused a lot of problems in my English class, like with kids spelling "later" like "L8r" and ...

That was really great! I loved the sort of shadowy imagery, with the descriptions of running water and time not mattering. Dark and mysterious. The only thing I'd like to ...

Hmmm. It was nice, but a little to flowers-and-perfume-y. None of it seemed very tangible. I don't think any guy, historical or not, would actually say this.

Nice. A bit different, painful without being angst. I liked the imagery. Passionate. You could add a verse or two, though. This version seemed to end too quickly.

I liked this a lot. It didn't try to be overly-meanigful, which was nice, just kind of a musing.

I liked this. It was really different. I did think the word "cloud" was used too many times though.

Hmmm. I liked how the poem came full-circle, but I didn't really get the meaning of the piece.

Though I liked this, I stopped reading before the last verse. It just seems to drag on. Cut out the weaker sentances, and shorten some others. Other than that, this ...

:smt043 I really liked this piece. Though it was a bit long, it was really funny.

No, its acutally superior to some of the newer sites I've been to. I like it a lot.